What do think of my beginning???????Hope You like it, the books called Breathing! Opinions and no rude comments:)
Breathing.
But Why?
Nothing made any sense.
The harsh blare of a siren screamed against my ears, colliding with the
The first few paragraphs are VERY DESCRIPTIVE. It's almost too descriptive; it went on and on. It sounds like an interesting story once you get things going though. Keep writing!
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more...Normally I'ma jealous skeez who hates pretty girls, but I find myself wanting to brush Julie Zorrilla's hair. Plus, she can sing! And play piano!! I also like the opera singer with the strange goth style and quiet intelligence.
more...(Additional note to self: Wash and brush hair more often, wear makeup, and contact lenses to work. Not the glasses that make you look like a lesbian nun, even though when you bought them you thought you looked just like Michelle Pfeiffer.
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